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Oct 17, 2008

Railway Station Banter

Has it happened to you??
When you're off to drop your loved one,
Is there a tear that gets lined up one by one?
Do those misty eyes hold back something you want to say?
And you go on thinking, Say it Say it before time gets out of your way.
Has it happened to you? Oh, has it happened to you?

At the risk and of breaking away from my usual style here is a shot at penning a few lines hoping to make it sound like a poem.

I solicit your earnest comments.
Sanjay

5 comments:

Pradeep Bharadwaj said...

yaranna bidakke hogi.. kannalli kannera dhare bandiddu..??? helguru...!! enisya...??? :P :D

Anonymous said...

Well, I'm certain your sister will be back from Chennai for another weekend. :-)

eyememyself said...

Whoa whoa.... super stuff:)

Sanju said...

@eyemyself, Thanks :-)

Jas said...

well versed...
u just said somethin so deep n thoughful so easily....
moral- just say wat one's hrt say u never kno lyf'll giv u a second chance or not...